tidus
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Post by tidus on Mar 24, 2006 14:13:27 GMT -5
When I look outside the window What do you think I see Rainbows, Sunshine, and Happiness or Darkness, Night and Depression Tell me if there's nothing wrong with me why do I feel this way Tell meif the worlds suppose to be bright why is it so dark Tell me if friends are there to lean on where are mine now that I need them I'm burning on the inside Trapped in a life I hate Trapped in a life I once loved Kept away from the life I lost As I break down into seclusion I can hear my own heart beat Telling me not to live Telling me I'm already beat As the fire on the inside becomes a beast of hate I fight it off as best I can but I know I cannot win With only stick in stone in hand I have to fight alone With no future with no past with nothing to fight for He strikes me down with one big blow Down I go in a heap With my final breath With my hearts final beat I let my life go It's over
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Post by Ashra on Mar 27, 2006 12:10:49 GMT -5
It's so sad... but so well written.... Just a few small mechanical errors, but those are easily fixed.
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